He finally made a blog and he revised the story. He is posting it in his blog. Many things have changed... I suggest anyone who liked it to go read the revisions.
Aye, aye, I participated.
So here it is Mooby's Blog
Enjoy!
I'm working on a new story which I might post soon.
Artica's Stories
Stories and thoughts written by me. Maybe a review of a book or movie here and there too.
